My ms Stay critique from RNA

Well, I was brave enough to open the package on Saturday and read it. Most of the feedback was on the negative side I must say but it has given me ideas to think about improving it. Two things that were said were that there was too much dialogue and too little description. So with the description I've decided to keep Lottie in her home town (my home town) and not relocate her to Greenwich, that way I will know the background more for the book. I still have a lot to think about on it so will do what I did with Forgotten Memories, and put it aside for a few years while I concentrate on other books, and hope in that time I will come up with more ideas to improve it. Meantime, I will focus on Bug then probably Forgotten Memories.